REVIEW: "Marley and Me" Agustina

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Agus Castellari

Movie: Marley and Me

The story begins with a guy called you Jonh Grogan gift a dog guy his girlfriend Jenny. the dog was very funny but very naughty. bit and broke everything I could find. had to teach him to become a good dog. But they could not. the dog is very beautiful. The family loves him. after a while the boys had children and Marley the dog (so they called it) became part of the family that I care for their children. Marley in a few years became ill and the children had to understand that it would die. and that was it. The family with three children followed his sad life.

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• A Inglés en el cuarto c le gusta esto.
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    Inglés en el cuarto c Hi Agus! Thanks for sharing your work!
    Van algunas sugerencias...
    
    *"you Jonh Grogan gift a dog guy his girlfriend Jenny": ¿qué quisiste decir en esta oración? ¿que John Grogan le regala a su novia un perro? En ese caso va: The story begins with a guy called Jonh Grogan who gives his girlfriend, Jenny, a dog.
    
    * "bit and broke everything I could find": Sería: It bit and broke everything it could find. Acordate que en inglés no omitimos el sujeto. En esta oración también omitiste el sujeto: "had to teach him to become a good dog"

    El Domingo a la(s) 17:24 · 
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    Inglés en el cuarto c ‎* En estas oraciones el verbo va en pasado: "the dog is very beautiful. The family loves him"
    
    * "The family with three children followed his sad life": ¿Siguieron tristes? qué tal decir que... The family was sad, but they went on with their lives...?

    El Domingo a la(s) 17:26 · 
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    Inglés en el cuarto c VERY GOOD AGUS! I love this film, it's sad, but it's a great film, and the actors are excellent.

    El Domingo a la(s) 17:28 · 
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